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Chapter 2

13:43 Sep 19 2011
Times Read: 574


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The evening in Witansky, became chilly and in this new beautiful old fashioned house its surprising that there is an air- conditioning system and even electric heaters. But no TV and no radios. Washing machine was found in the garage and its like never or hardly ever been used.







The kitchen was big and nice. To one of them this was like a dream that came true. The one got the Boa constrictor of course I am talking about, and called the Maltese Knight. He is a chef in private life and as well in career. His dream is to have his own Restaurant or a Rock Cafe' Diner.







As in this house looked small from the outside of course the appearance can be quite deceiving. " Never judge by the cover's book." At first they well all yelling at the girl cause, she was the one who chose it and bought it. " Come ' on guys. It was a good deal. Not much pricey and what is more? there are many bedrooms in it although it does not look like it. If you don't go in how can you know if its good for you or not? "



She is a rebel, yet known well how to choose houses, places, and also the furniture. She has quite a good instincts, on how to make business.

She is well known also as Wraith. She looses her temper very fast like a New York Minute and there is no stopping her from causing chaos all over the place.

Anyways she had the keys, and went in first. The Knight went immediately to the kitchen as if he had been in the place before if like a Dejavu. The other 3 brothers were looking around in the living room and dining room. Both chambers were separated by a arch - door, made by oak and glass. and then there are the other three doors in the corridor. One is for the basement, one leads to the Garage and other to the restroom (toilet). From the kitchen you have quite a nice view of a small but nice private garden. There is already two large wooden tables and chairs and Large Sunscreen made of bamboo umbrellas or whatever you call it. Our pets would love it. It has some trees and also there is an empty chicken pen. Upstairs there are six large bedrooms and 2 bathrooms. The girl took the largest that concludes also en-suite bathroom and no one said anything since none of them want to see a naked with just towel sister going from one room to another. They all have nice and large windows, With a very good view of the field that faces the back, and to the front that faces the town that is surrounding by some electric yet old fashioned poles and the rest just black shadow under the pale moon.



The girl loves beer once she finish her shower. Its like everyday ritual. At seven of the evening she takes a nice warm shower and when she finish she goes in the kitchen for a bottle or a can of Heineken. But this time the beer is not there. All finished. What to do??



Sovah have a real problem controlling her anger and its like a bomb mine.



She is loosing it and rage coming all up to her face and fuming ............ But Moloch, One of her younger brother approached her before she gave a tantrum. She remained silent, yet went to her room, changed clothes and went out to search for some convenience store that sells alcohol. Little Sovah knows that this town prohibited alcohol from every shop and bars and even restaurants.



To make it worst, this town does not even have any convenience store at all. There is only 1 Butcher, 1 supermarket and 1 pharmacy and 1 fish market including a green grocer. The bars allows only men of age thirties and no female and kids or teenagers are allowed. She was dumbfounded when she visited all places and not one shop was open. She tried the bars but wasn't allowed to get in. She became really pissed off, specially without her beer. It was not late at night and yet to sleep without any alcohol is a problem. She asked if she can buy at least 1 packet of cigarettes but men outside the bar glared at her and some where shocked heavily. Mumbling and whispering was going on...... "This kid is still young yet she dares to destroy her life....'' Does she have any shame to be this disgraceful? And look at her clothes and all those weird earrings in weird places.....oh God..... it must be really end of the world.....''



They of course thought that she couldn't hear them but Sovah got a very acute hearing, and every word of what they were saying was all heard. She was feeling uncomfortable and went back to the Pick-up van and drove back home scoffing and pouting like a 9 year old kid who couldn't buy her own candy.



She went home and of course her brothers were trying to do something to entertain themselves with no television. No t.v is sure boring as hell and not even internet, nor telephone. Good thing they had mobile phones, but the reception is poor. Two of her brothers were reading, other three were playing on the floor some cards. Poker or black jack, their favourite game. She grabbed a piece of paper and a pencil and started to draw. She is so in to arts, and that was her best way to make the time goes faster.



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BeautifulDiscord
BeautifulDiscord
12:13 Sep 30 2011

Good Job. ^^ I dig it.





 

The Hidden and forbidden of Silent Town

00:33 Sep 18 2011
Times Read: 608


In the mist of the night, maybe at 23hr past 30 people start to wonder what lurks in the night, from the sky or from the ground or waters. In this village called Witansky everyone stays at home, once it becomes 22:00. That might even surprises you but even the adults stays at home and the houses look all nice and beautiful but inside their houses its full of religious charms and protection against evil.



In this village rock music, metal, rap and things like that aren't allowed and not even other type of music. Only Christians songs are OK.



In the morning is very peaceful yet so weird. The kids when they go to school with the van, none of them talk to each other and at school everyone is stranger to everyone. Teachers give them lectures, classwork, test, homeworks, and exams and yet they call the students by the number of the seat. If the student is not in class or something happened, no gossips, no news at all. That kid never been remembered not even existed to them, to anyone apart the family. Or at least that what everyone might think. Alas!! its the opposite. You are not even allowed to say the kids name even if its to say a prayer to say rest in peace.



They believe if the child gone missing, cause the child had been chosen to be taken away in the woods. The witches called the child to go to the woods. Nobody goes in there not even an adult. Even its its own child, the adult won't follow. They are so afraid to go in the woods. They say, "The woods are cursed by the Devil. The devil comes once every month to take a child, as a meal, as a sacrifice. The devil calls the witches and tells them which child he wants and the name too. They make a huge bonfire, music of their own, wine and blood, forbidden fruits and naked witches. Be it a man or a woman. they are all naked and they summon the Devil. Their master comes from the fire or from the air or earth. The water if they are near the river and summon him from it.



They have intercourse with each other and also with the devil. But the child must be a virgin to be taken by him. If one of them disobeys his orders, for sure is going to be punished, in the most cruelest way. It can be physical, mental, sexual, or even emotional. It can be all of them. " That is what had been said in the catholic church in that town. That is how many depicts the devil and the witches. The priest use it to keep everyone away from the truth that is hidden behind by saying a myth or whatever to scare them away. Kids are afraid of course but somehow once a month, it goes miss 1 or 2 children at night or when the sunset comes.



In the myth, Trolls and evil faeries attack, when it comes in between the lines. like mid-day or midnight, between the doors, window sills, or when it is eclipse.



The televisions, radios, and electronics like those are forbidden in the houses. Only books can be seen, but no faeries tales. just Bible and school books and reading books to reality yet no thriller or horror book will be seen.



The kids are to sleep at 8 and the adults at 10.



A new family comes into this town. This is very unusual one. Six members they are. All men and one woman, and their dress code is such a real eyesore to this kind of town people. Many of them are wearing all black, plants, in leather, boots with heals or platformed, long black haired on males and female got red dyed hair mixed with splashes of blue and purple, and short hair like punks also got many piercings on her ears but not much piercings as the guys. She got 2 cats with her, some got dogs and one of them got the snake in the aquarium. A constrictor that is.



They are really weird family, outgoing and cheesy ones too. Lets add noisy very noisy people, that these townees are going to have a big problem in accepting them. And these new comers are going to cause problems or going to follow the rules and law of this weird silent town?



next chapter is on going

till then feel free to comment. thanks



Creed





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ventrueprince2
ventrueprince2
00:56 Oct 20 2011

Dont think I will be spending my vacation there. O_O, lol.








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