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Broken Inside

19:09 May 29 2009
Times Read: 590


Another song :)





Broken inside

I’m broken inside

Cut up and torn

A rose made of thorns

Rests in my heart



One more life going down the drain

One more love never seen again

I’m falling down with all this pain

I’m the broken glass in a broken frame…..



Oh I’m broken inside

Broken inside

Shattered and bleeding

You can’t hear me screaming

Your name



Soft whispers in the shadows haunt my every step

The breeze blows in mourning, soft winds of deep regret

The cold rain bites through to my skin frozen wet

You left me to die here with no remorse, not yet….



I’m broken

Broken

Broken inside

No-one can heal me

No-one can feel me

No-one can fix my heart


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DeadHeir
DeadHeir
19:41 May 29 2009

this is really very good, its smooth and flows, and paints strong images (for me, atleast, it almost reminds me somewhat of my own style?) it also reads like it could be an Evanescence song, or sang somewhat in that style...very well done, very pretty





 

Thoughts on Love

10:36 May 04 2009
Times Read: 613


Love unreciprocated

Is not love rejected

Love rejected

Is love pushed away

Love unreciprocated

Is love not the same

But still love in a way



A friend can love

But not be in love

A lover can be in love

But not love as a friend

A partner can love

And also be in love

In a way they are

Friend and lover in one



A man can love a woman

They say that is right

A man who loves a man

They say is wrong

A woman kissing a man

Is seen as normal

A woman kissing a woman

Is liked by many

And sometimes encouraged



Two men kissing

Or even holding hands

Is looked upon with outrage

They say it is wrong

And even shameful

The priests and church members

Say they will be damned

They will be cast into Hell

For showing who they really are

For loving, as the Bible tells us



But if love is really

What is important and good

Than why waste time

Putting labels and shame

On the people we should be loving

Why do we fight and cause war

Killing and harming

When we should be embracing

And loving



You can say I know nothing

I won’t say I know all

All I know are these things

Love is love

No matter how it’s perceived

If I love, it is love

If I care, it is love

If I am a friend, it is still love

And if I say “I love you”

It means I truly do


COMMENTS

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sippa
sippa
11:07 May 04 2009

to most people there are three important things in life: truth, honesty and love. the greatest of these is love.

you capture this perfectly





WolfenVampire
WolfenVampire
15:03 May 04 2009

Simply Beautiful, you have so much heart sister and I'm not ashamed to admit that "I love you" and all of my other freinds/family. ^_^





SuicideDoll
SuicideDoll
12:41 May 06 2009

Beautiful and very true!








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