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Dissolving People

20:57 Dec 20 2008
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-Dissolving People-



fade away civilians

humanity collectively blurred

watched from slanted perspectives

no intent to bias observations

just curiosity practically applied



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In That Moment

00:39 Dec 19 2008
Times Read: 738


-In That Moment-



as my tickers tock' missed a gear

I relaxed my sedated grip

As sound faded,

One sweeping Whoo.. Oos

I projected me

As I imagine others

Perceive me

Much like a interactive dream

Devoid of physical sensation

Yet" visually" vivid



A stirring fogged veil

by imagining motion

I advanced into the

Vivid panaroma

Such an assuring site

I may have hallucinated

But it suits me fine

If your at peace

With your accepted assurance

Then leave others to their own


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VAMPIREBLONDEE
VAMPIREBLONDEE
01:30 Dec 22 2008

Beautiful and moveing poem





dabbler
dabbler
02:56 Dec 22 2008

I want to rework it as touch still, thank you for the feed back...








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