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An Empty Revolver

20:49 Jun 30 2008
Times Read: 779


mine was a horror writers role

to make a plot

one with a vicious villain

a seemingly helpless victim

one that reached out

to all those crisis resources

only to be turned away

for lack of community funds

friends that under played their role

a few nights on their couch

to let her abusive villain cool off

or rehearse his come-back lines

how truly amazed he was when

she came back with a smile

or was it a smirk?

she eased into her routine role

apologetic for her lack of respect

surly he was right all along

she held her suffered pose

long enough to empty her revolver

nothing fatal at first

one to the villains gut

one to each knee

(that’s three determined shots)

then one for each "PLEASE?"

number six..Finale


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VAMPIREBLONDEE
VAMPIREBLONDEE
21:01 Jun 30 2008

Vivid words. I can see it in my minds eye as I read it.





dreamseller
dreamseller
23:56 Aug 10 2008

nice





Isis101
Isis101
22:32 Oct 20 2008

very nice, Dab.





 

Here I Am Finding

02:29 Jun 06 2008
Times Read: 796


not a seeker am I

this quest is set

there is a beginning

right after the end

I can rest assured

that I may be right

or even better

find something

beyond anything

I could ever imagine


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VAMPIREBLONDEE
VAMPIREBLONDEE
14:00 Aug 04 2009

I like this poem. Its simple and yet so full of wisdom.





 

Crafty God

03:12 Jun 05 2008
Times Read: 806


What need have we for paste

we have painted by numbers

honing to perfection

our project, such a hobby

one that we must depend on

to craft a Great Here After

with the Pop-cycle Sticks

macaroni, and glitter

that we left strewn about

for others to attempt

to create a better tomorrow


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VAMPIREBLONDEE
VAMPIREBLONDEE
03:29 Jun 05 2008

I don't think I'll leave tomorow in anothers hands...

I know what your saying ~wink~ I have made my own better tommorow in my own way...no glitter, just my own secret ingredients...








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