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Soon, a short poem: written by me

20:18 May 27 2018
Times Read: 369


Storm riddled skies, with distant stars filling her eyes, far from my grasp but close enough to feel, her aura shines bright under the night skies and her words bring me to a kneel, her hands radiate with passionate glows and soon my body will be the only one that she knows, i am within her and she within me, her pull i can not fight and soon again our hands will meet.

- Immorteb


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immorteb
immorteb
20:38 May 27 2018

thank you :)





RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
00:36 May 28 2018

Luv it 50/50





immorteb
immorteb
00:44 May 28 2018

thank you :)





VvBLOODLUSTvV
VvBLOODLUSTvV
04:12 May 28 2018

💞





immorteb
immorteb
04:20 May 28 2018

thank you ;)





 

I've come for you: poem written by me

05:46 May 26 2018
Times Read: 393


Walking among dead trees in a forest of blackened dead leaves, i search for you, i call out and the owls respond, there is no end in sight, ive come for you.

The frigid wind slices past my skin, the stiffness in my body kicks in the deeper i go, i reach a point between two living trees the only two here, suddenly the temperature changes, cold grows to an intense warmth, confused i search for a clue.

I peak left, i peak right, i then am blinded by a ball of light, shocked i ask can this be true? She comes close, rubbing my neck with her nose and lets out a soft sigh as she whispers "ive come for you"...

- Immorteb


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LZAPERVERT
LZAPERVERT
05:53 May 26 2018

Cool ;)





immorteb
immorteb
05:55 May 26 2018

Thank you :) *dances* lol





SoulDevourer
SoulDevourer
06:03 May 26 2018

💞





immorteb
immorteb
06:06 May 26 2018

Thank you kindly :)





ShaqraHelel
ShaqraHelel
11:31 May 26 2018

Love it





immorteb
immorteb
13:59 May 26 2018

Thank you :)





RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
14:42 May 26 2018

Love it 100/100





immorteb
immorteb
14:47 May 26 2018

Thank you kindly :)





 

Closer: Written by me

01:02 May 25 2018
Times Read: 421


With high noon upon us, in the shadows we lurk, ravaging intentions spark the most passionate flames but this fire doesnt hurt,

Drawn in over far away lands to quench a thirst only the dark ones have, when reached only the owls will be able to tell the tale of what was had,

Lustful driven hunger leaves no skin untouched, consuming each others life force pouring from every cut, take me in as i take you,

Hearts beating harder as metaphysical fangs grow more stiff penetrating the very flesh that brought upon my travels, deep sighs and opened eyes with every cloth that i unravel,

Come a bit closer, for tonight we will be one, the ecstasy of the feed has just begun.

- Immorteb


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VvBLOODLUSTvV
VvBLOODLUSTvV
01:16 May 25 2018

💞





immorteb
immorteb
01:18 May 25 2018

thank you :)





LZAPERVERT
LZAPERVERT
01:22 May 25 2018

Dude, I like that one :)





immorteb
immorteb
01:25 May 25 2018

thanks :) much appreciated





RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
16:39 May 25 2018

1000/1000





immorteb
immorteb
16:43 May 25 2018

Thank you :)





ladyfae
ladyfae
00:42 May 29 2018

Mmm. Soft and lovely.





immorteb
immorteb
01:15 May 29 2018

thank you ;)





 

I call to you: written by me

02:20 May 24 2018
Times Read: 439


Not in a great mood so the mind is working over time...

I call to you, look deep and follow your desire, allow me to take you on a trip to other realms, we can dance around the fire.

I call to you, i know you feel it too, in the dark ill know you entirely from the caresses we both will do, engraved in my mind, tangled in each others arms, the blood taken in like aged wine sends shivers down each others spine.

I call to you, no longer fight it, a beast can only hold for so long until he breaks and can no longer hide it, submit to me, and let it take control, let me get drunk off of you and you off of me.

I call to you, your shield can not hold forever, from the passionate exchange to the hard whips of leather, move in close and grant me a seat, for in your realm, eyes locked in, together we shall feast.

- Immorteb

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VvBLOODLUSTvV
VvBLOODLUSTvV
05:45 May 24 2018

💓





immorteb
immorteb
05:47 May 24 2018

thank you :)





VvBLOODLUSTvV
VvBLOODLUSTvV
06:07 May 24 2018

Your welcome. :)





RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
16:38 May 25 2018

100/100





immorteb
immorteb
16:47 May 25 2018

Thank you :)





ladyfae
ladyfae
00:44 May 29 2018

*giggle* Wow.





immorteb
immorteb
01:13 May 29 2018

:)





 

souls embrace: written by me

22:48 May 23 2018
Times Read: 449


Hidden from the sun as its light weakens my being ever so brutally, but the light you omit calls to me with no harm but gentle whispers, this is new to me.

How does your soul feel? I yearn to trace your energy with the tip of my tongue and speak of great journeys after, our strength as one body shall live throughout ages after rapture.

Intensity rising as breaths deepen, it is no longer the light but in your presence i weaken.

Wings cradle your flesh without physical touch, from light to dark we shall dance and devour each other, even just a taste would leave a high, it could never be too much.

Bodies connected to one another as tentacles pierced deep, the warm cuddle of our souls embrace softly guides us to sleep.

- Immorteb


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VvBLOODLUSTvV
VvBLOODLUSTvV
23:28 May 23 2018

💞





immorteb
immorteb
23:29 May 23 2018

Thank you :)





RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
16:37 May 25 2018

100/100





immorteb
immorteb
16:44 May 25 2018

Thank you :)





ladyfae
ladyfae
00:46 May 29 2018

Awww. So cozy! ^.^





immorteb
immorteb
01:04 May 29 2018

glad you like it :)





 

Her Poem: Written by me

14:13 May 23 2018
Times Read: 457


As the sun faints away and the moon rises to hide the day, shadows awaken and dance the lands covering all that seek rest from the light.

It is then i come to you traveling on the shadows edge, your veins pulsating catches my sight from a distance like a meteor in the night skies, I can not fight the trance it has me in so i move closer and look in your eyes.

With a devious grin i softly whisper a greeting, slowly caressing her face upon meeting and swiftly tilt her head to the side, gently pressed lips on her neck to feel the vibrations that her life force provides.

Her deep sigh sounds through my mind and i instantly go blind placing my teeth against her skin, tongue traces her neck she grabs a hold of me as i sink my teeth deep in, her weakened moan grows stronger and she whisper in my ear "oh please let us sin".

I regain sight and look up to see her delighted eyes, gripped her hand tight and guide her along as i tell her stories of mortal lies, the smell of her perfume and grace in her every stride bounds me forever in this high.

- Immorteb


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VvBLOODLUSTvV
VvBLOODLUSTvV
16:18 May 23 2018

💖





immorteb
immorteb
17:17 May 23 2018

Thank you :)





RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
16:36 May 25 2018

100/100





immorteb
immorteb
16:45 May 25 2018

Thank you :)





ladyfae
ladyfae
00:48 May 29 2018

Love the imagery in this one.





immorteb
immorteb
01:07 May 29 2018

thank you kindly :)





 

Open your doors poem: written by me

03:25 May 23 2018
Times Read: 469


This is what happens when i write in the dark, to some chelsea wolfe...

You have allowed me this close because you yearn for the same euphoria as i starve for, open your doors and allow me to embrace your essence like admiring a freshly plucked rose. Because this is what my stomach growls for.

The rough grip you have on my flesh as we embody beasts with arms wrapped tightly and teeth at play, passionate tossing and turning allowing our screams to awake any dead from their grave.

You have opened up your doors to my darkness and ill seep deep within, picking at your sacral essence and watch as you contort from this trip of sin.

We descend back to the mundane with glimmering grins, so when i return ill come for more, so as long as you promise to open up your door.

- Immorteb

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VvBLOODLUSTvV
VvBLOODLUSTvV
04:17 May 23 2018

💖





immorteb
immorteb
04:18 May 23 2018

Thank you kindly :)





VvBLOODLUSTvV
VvBLOODLUSTvV
07:19 May 23 2018

You are welcome...





RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
16:33 May 25 2018

100/100





immorteb
immorteb
16:43 May 25 2018

Thank you :)





 

Energy Poem: written by me

20:36 May 22 2018
Times Read: 481


This came to me while listening to energy meditation, so it may be a bit scrambled but this is what my mind thought up...

Throughout generations many beings have walked the earth, from a mere thought, conception to birth.

The first touch you deliver will leave an imprint that never fades, the love, anger, joy, stress, is all energy that lurks, even the hate.

Imagine all that you can feel if you just be silent, go to a empty field and just kneel, emotions carry through time, distraction can cease when you look behind your eyelids.

Euphoria reached when you seek that feel, to encounter energy as old as time will have you question what is real.

Walk with a purpose, feed with respect, imprint this universe with your presence, because there will be someone feeling your soul way after your death.

- Immorteb

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VvBLOODLUSTvV
VvBLOODLUSTvV
20:43 May 22 2018

💖





immorteb
immorteb
20:54 May 22 2018

Thank you kindly :)





VvBLOODLUSTvV
VvBLOODLUSTvV
21:18 May 22 2018

You're welcome.





KatherinexArduxBloodwolf
KatherinexArduxBloodwolf
03:25 May 23 2018

I understand it completely....it's a call to those of the awakened...





immorteb
immorteb
03:27 May 23 2018

Bingo, you nailed it...





RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
16:31 May 25 2018

100/100





immorteb
immorteb
16:46 May 25 2018

Thank you :)





 

the watcher: a poem written by me

21:25 May 21 2018
Times Read: 496


Seated quietly in the corner of my abyss and sound can not travel far in my current setting, i feel a presence watching me closely, moving swiftly, i wish i knew where it was heading,

I squint and search through the dark and find myself puzzled beyond explanation, is that a grin i see lurking within the shadows waiting for my hesitation?

I do not fear but with no thought on how it got here or what it wants i begin to accept its company, although mysterious and its lurking presence i begin to question my sanity am i going delirious?

I shout out "what do you want?!" And it responds "to haunt" and i grin back with a plan, "i do not know how or why you're here but listen close take my hand and you can come with me",

It inches closer and grabs my hand as i smile and stand and begin to walk it to the adjacent room, i whisper "you've come here at the wrong hour, now who sent you, tell me whom?" As i placed a collar around its neck,

"You are now mine and we shall have fun, we have many things to see" its grin faded as it realized it was wrong there is nothing more dark than me, you see a watcher watches but a doer does, and when its all said and done, only the darkest of dark beings can show you how its really done.
-Immorteb


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VvBLOODLUSTvV
VvBLOODLUSTvV
22:01 May 21 2018

💖





immorteb
immorteb
22:23 May 21 2018

Thank you :)





RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
22:47 May 21 2018

Woww nice love it 100/100





immorteb
immorteb
22:59 May 21 2018

Thank you kindly :)





 

a meal done right poem: written by me

03:48 May 21 2018
Times Read: 508


I sit and wait for you to bring me your soul eagerly awaiting, to feed until i am pleasantly full is my goal,

Bursts of energy and intensifying acts fill the room and the darkness closes off all senses to mundane attributes as i feed with you on your back,

The willful submissions and frightful stares as i move in for the first taste of whatever human feeling you have left to share,

Your gaze lit up by the moons glare and the echos of our voices as we touch our metaphysical doorways sound through the night, pulses of energy give way to fulfill the hunger as starvation ceases mid-flight, i would say that is one hell of a meal done right.
- Immorteb


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VvBLOODLUSTvV
VvBLOODLUSTvV
03:57 May 21 2018

💖





immorteb
immorteb
04:00 May 21 2018

Thank you kindly :)





RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
22:45 May 21 2018

I love this ^_^





immorteb
immorteb
22:59 May 21 2018

Thank you :)





ladyfae
ladyfae
00:50 May 29 2018

Hehe. ^.^





immorteb
immorteb
01:16 May 29 2018

:)





 

a poem written by me.

21:51 May 18 2018
Times Read: 529


I am not human but a shadow encapsulated in a temporary mold of flesh, pushed out of the darkest corners of the universe to fulfill my mission in which i question,

I am not a prisoner nor a slave, i am not a monster but another being wrapped in pigmented mortal mesh, to become attached to me and wish for my permanent stay would teach you a dark lesson.

I see things you can not, i feel things you can only imagine, the lure of a strong aura comes to me like soft perfume riding the wind, it leaves me salivating and yearning for more.

So if you dare let me in and engulf your soul and cease this starvation, i pledge an eternal cell for your soul filled with everlasting explosions of bliss and lightless dreams...
- Immorteb


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RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
22:17 May 18 2018

:o
Ooo I like this one alot lolz. 1000/1000





immorteb
immorteb
22:21 May 18 2018

Thank you :)





SoulDevourer
SoulDevourer
22:27 May 18 2018

I like this as well.





immorteb
immorteb
22:30 May 18 2018

Thank you very much :)





VvBLOODLUSTvV
VvBLOODLUSTvV
00:13 May 19 2018

Your welcome





VioletShadows
VioletShadows
03:01 May 20 2018

sigh.............'explosions of bliss'........... something to dream of..........





immorteb
immorteb
03:24 May 20 2018

Glad you like it, thank you





 

I must feed: a poem written by me

03:34 May 18 2018
Times Read: 555


The cravings just too much to bear,
So i must feed,
Give me you,
From the tips of your toes to the top of your hair,
I must feed,
But i only hunger for you,
I can taste you with just a stare,
I must feed,
But no one tastes like you,
This feeling you give off when i feed is magically rare,
I must feed,
But my appetite only desires you,
If your mortal being ever perishes then i shall starve,
I must feed,
But time is wasting,
A dark king and queen together statues they will carve,
I must feed,
But tonight my dark Queen you are my feast.
Come eat with your beast.
- immorteb


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RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
14:12 May 18 2018

Woww... I like this... it's intense and sexy and very dark. 100/100





immorteb
immorteb
14:40 May 18 2018

Aww thank you :)





 

Your Queen: a poem written by me

09:22 May 16 2018
Times Read: 564


I call to her,
Her answer is fierce,
With her wings cradling my soul,
Your heart she will pierce,
Nights falls,
The screams of the weak with the wind roll,
She's the calming darkness in the righteous halls,
Though they fear her starving lust,
She is our mother,
So her we shall trust,
Even kings of the jungle bow in place,
Your innocence she will erase,
Bow as well,
As human or in spirit,
Your Majesty, your Bloodline,
Your Queen... Lilith.
- Immorteb


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RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
14:13 May 18 2018

Wow I like this. It seems ur really loyal. Nice ^_^





 

A poem i wrote

04:51 May 13 2018
Times Read: 583


If you can tell me what i am referring to in this poem +10 for you.


Oh how I loathe you,
Some say you are normal,
And some say you are a curse,
You keep me safe and at times you harm me i dont know which is worse,
My mind is overwhelmed with unbearable thoughts,
Every situation i ran from i should have fought,
But you gave me no choice,
My wings took over leaving me with no voice,
How do i stop you?
I had a talk with you and begged you to go,
How toxic you are within,
You told me untrue,
You would rather stay until i have no more fight,
What will i amount to?
I know how to part from you,
But what will my loved ones thing with what im about to do?
Who summoned you?
You are no longer welcomed,
You lie to me with promises of safety,
But i only see myself dying alone,
Everyone will hate me,
You made me lose everything even my home,
I will stop you if its the last thing i do,
If you take this last thing from me we are through,
So who summoned you?
I wont ask again,
Answer me quickly, because this may be the end,
I hate everything about you,
Im ready to give up,
Where is your safety now?
Because now I truly dont give a fuck...
- Immorteb


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LZAPERVERT
LZAPERVERT
04:56 May 13 2018

An asshole. It's a poem about a asshole. Did I win?





xTheCrookedCrossx
xTheCrookedCrossx
05:10 May 13 2018

Is it poo?





immorteb
immorteb
05:15 May 13 2018

Nooooo but you both win a cookie amyway lol





LZAPERVERT
LZAPERVERT
05:17 May 13 2018

SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT I love sugar :)





Ylvax
Ylvax
17:34 May 13 2018

A poem about love?





immorteb
immorteb
20:09 May 13 2018

Nope its an internal battle but its speaking to anxiety and the affects it has.





RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
14:13 May 18 2018

50/50





ladyfae
ladyfae
00:55 May 29 2018

It could also be perceived as caution.





immorteb
immorteb
01:07 May 29 2018

this is true :)





 

Tantric Love: A poem by me

22:15 May 10 2018
Times Read: 595


Beings of another kind,
We touch without touching,
I can feel you in my mind,
I notice your aura ,
Your presence is stronger than those left behind,
I yearn for your physical being,
But feed on your soul,
I know your body without seeing,
Us as one,
Keeps us from going cold,
Once inside and no where to hide,
Our bond will never grow old,
Forever some say,
But we shall exist beyond,
The universe cannot control,
Explosions as we come to a meet,
You satisfy my hunger,
Our paths finally merge and all along it was you that i seek.
- Immorteb


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RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
14:14 May 18 2018

I love this





 

Incubus: a poem by me

03:46 May 08 2018
Times Read: 600


(I)ntertwined fingers squeezed firmly with nails digged deep,
(N)octurnal souls meeting for a session of pure bliss,
(C)hanneling the pure essence of what makes our hearts tick,
(U)ncontrollable connections brought together as one to feast,
(B)east like hunger for ones soul can not be contained,
(U)nder the cloak of night the dance commences,
(S)immering in blended essences of each other's beings as the wait begins for the next meal...
- Immorteb


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RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
14:14 May 18 2018

Wow... just wow... ;)





XxSithisxX
XxSithisxX
06:34 Dec 16 2020

Nice Acrostic. Villanelle is my fav. style of writing, but this is good!





immorteb
immorteb
13:14 Dec 16 2020

Thank you, much appreciated





 

Energy Lust: A poem by me

15:03 May 07 2018
Times Read: 606


Inside im hungry,
I lust for your presence,
When im near dont rush me,
I want to savor your essence,
Treambling all around,
I get more weak,
Mesmorized by the sounds,
Engulfed by your soul,
I cant even speak,
To feel you after i leave is my goal,
Intoxicated by your energy,
We touched with our soul,
Even after distance you will remember me,
Teeth pierced flesh,
I will remember that taste until the end of me.
- Immorteb


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RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
14:15 May 18 2018

90 /90





 

Embrace the Dark: Something I wrote a while back.

02:23 May 05 2018
Times Read: 614


I never understood why they fear the dark, it is not where light ceases to exist, but where the moon goes to park, no one sees your pain, no one sees your drain, recharging as i see it, preparing you for a brand new start, as the night fades, so does your shield, so do not be afraid, for you are now healed... - immorteb


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RaventheRook5
RaventheRook5
14:15 May 18 2018

I am feeling this one... 10/10








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