Storm riddled skies, with distant stars filling her eyes, far from my grasp but close enough to feel, her aura shines bright under the night skies and her words bring me to a kneel, her hands radiate with passionate glows and soon my body will be the only one that she knows, i am within her and she within me, her pull i can not fight and soon again our hands will meet.
- Immorteb
Walking among dead trees in a forest of blackened dead leaves, i search for you, i call out and the owls respond, there is no end in sight, ive come for you.
The frigid wind slices past my skin, the stiffness in my body kicks in the deeper i go, i reach a point between two living trees the only two here, suddenly the temperature changes, cold grows to an intense warmth, confused i search for a clue.
I peak left, i peak right, i then am blinded by a ball of light, shocked i ask can this be true? She comes close, rubbing my neck with her nose and lets out a soft sigh as she whispers "ive come for you"...
- Immorteb
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Cool ;)
Thank you :) *dances* lol
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With high noon upon us, in the shadows we lurk, ravaging intentions spark the most passionate flames but this fire doesnt hurt,
Drawn in over far away lands to quench a thirst only the dark ones have, when reached only the owls will be able to tell the tale of what was had,
Lustful driven hunger leaves no skin untouched, consuming each others life force pouring from every cut, take me in as i take you,
Hearts beating harder as metaphysical fangs grow more stiff penetrating the very flesh that brought upon my travels, deep sighs and opened eyes with every cloth that i unravel,
Come a bit closer, for tonight we will be one, the ecstasy of the feed has just begun.
- Immorteb
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Mmm. Soft and lovely.
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Hidden from the sun as its light weakens my being ever so brutally, but the light you omit calls to me with no harm but gentle whispers, this is new to me.
How does your soul feel? I yearn to trace your energy with the tip of my tongue and speak of great journeys after, our strength as one body shall live throughout ages after rapture.
Intensity rising as breaths deepen, it is no longer the light but in your presence i weaken.
Wings cradle your flesh without physical touch, from light to dark we shall dance and devour each other, even just a taste would leave a high, it could never be too much.
Bodies connected to one another as tentacles pierced deep, the warm cuddle of our souls embrace softly guides us to sleep.
- Immorteb
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Awww. So cozy! ^.^
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As the sun faints away and the moon rises to hide the day, shadows awaken and dance the lands covering all that seek rest from the light.
It is then i come to you traveling on the shadows edge, your veins pulsating catches my sight from a distance like a meteor in the night skies, I can not fight the trance it has me in so i move closer and look in your eyes.
With a devious grin i softly whisper a greeting, slowly caressing her face upon meeting and swiftly tilt her head to the side, gently pressed lips on her neck to feel the vibrations that her life force provides.
Her deep sigh sounds through my mind and i instantly go blind placing my teeth against her skin, tongue traces her neck she grabs a hold of me as i sink my teeth deep in, her weakened moan grows stronger and she whisper in my ear "oh please let us sin".
I regain sight and look up to see her delighted eyes, gripped her hand tight and guide her along as i tell her stories of mortal lies, the smell of her perfume and grace in her every stride bounds me forever in this high.
- Immorteb
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Love the imagery in this one.
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I understand it completely....it's a call to those of the awakened...
Bingo, you nailed it...
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Seated quietly in the corner of my abyss and sound can not travel far in my current setting, i feel a presence watching me closely, moving swiftly, i wish i knew where it was heading,
I squint and search through the dark and find myself puzzled beyond explanation, is that a grin i see lurking within the shadows waiting for my hesitation?
I do not fear but with no thought on how it got here or what it wants i begin to accept its company, although mysterious and its lurking presence i begin to question my sanity am i going delirious?
I shout out "what do you want?!" And it responds "to haunt" and i grin back with a plan, "i do not know how or why you're here but listen close take my hand and you can come with me",
It inches closer and grabs my hand as i smile and stand and begin to walk it to the adjacent room, i whisper "you've come here at the wrong hour, now who sent you, tell me whom?" As i placed a collar around its neck,
"You are now mine and we shall have fun, we have many things to see" its grin faded as it realized it was wrong there is nothing more dark than me, you see a watcher watches but a doer does, and when its all said and done, only the darkest of dark beings can show you how its really done.
-Immorteb
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I sit and wait for you to bring me your soul eagerly awaiting, to feed until i am pleasantly full is my goal,
Bursts of energy and intensifying acts fill the room and the darkness closes off all senses to mundane attributes as i feed with you on your back,
The willful submissions and frightful stares as i move in for the first taste of whatever human feeling you have left to share,
Your gaze lit up by the moons glare and the echos of our voices as we touch our metaphysical doorways sound through the night, pulses of energy give way to fulfill the hunger as starvation ceases mid-flight, i would say that is one hell of a meal done right.
- Immorteb
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I am not human but a shadow encapsulated in a temporary mold of flesh, pushed out of the darkest corners of the universe to fulfill my mission in which i question,
I am not a prisoner nor a slave, i am not a monster but another being wrapped in pigmented mortal mesh, to become attached to me and wish for my permanent stay would teach you a dark lesson.
I see things you can not, i feel things you can only imagine, the lure of a strong aura comes to me like soft perfume riding the wind, it leaves me salivating and yearning for more.
So if you dare let me in and engulf your soul and cease this starvation, i pledge an eternal cell for your soul filled with everlasting explosions of bliss and lightless dreams...
- Immorteb
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Ooo I like this one alot lolz. 1000/1000
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I like this as well.
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sigh.............'explosions of bliss'........... something to dream of..........
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The cravings just too much to bear,
So i must feed,
Give me you,
From the tips of your toes to the top of your hair,
I must feed,
But i only hunger for you,
I can taste you with just a stare,
I must feed,
But no one tastes like you,
This feeling you give off when i feed is magically rare,
I must feed,
But my appetite only desires you,
If your mortal being ever perishes then i shall starve,
I must feed,
But time is wasting,
A dark king and queen together statues they will carve,
I must feed,
But tonight my dark Queen you are my feast.
Come eat with your beast.
- immorteb
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Woww... I like this... it's intense and sexy and very dark. 100/100
Aww thank you :)
I call to her,
Her answer is fierce,
With her wings cradling my soul,
Your heart she will pierce,
Nights falls,
The screams of the weak with the wind roll,
She's the calming darkness in the righteous halls,
Though they fear her starving lust,
She is our mother,
So her we shall trust,
Even kings of the jungle bow in place,
Your innocence she will erase,
Bow as well,
As human or in spirit,
Your Majesty, your Bloodline,
Your Queen... Lilith.
- Immorteb
If you can tell me what i am referring to in this poem +10 for you.
Oh how I loathe you,
Some say you are normal,
And some say you are a curse,
You keep me safe and at times you harm me i dont know which is worse,
My mind is overwhelmed with unbearable thoughts,
Every situation i ran from i should have fought,
But you gave me no choice,
My wings took over leaving me with no voice,
How do i stop you?
I had a talk with you and begged you to go,
How toxic you are within,
You told me untrue,
You would rather stay until i have no more fight,
What will i amount to?
I know how to part from you,
But what will my loved ones thing with what im about to do?
Who summoned you?
You are no longer welcomed,
You lie to me with promises of safety,
But i only see myself dying alone,
Everyone will hate me,
You made me lose everything even my home,
I will stop you if its the last thing i do,
If you take this last thing from me we are through,
So who summoned you?
I wont ask again,
Answer me quickly, because this may be the end,
I hate everything about you,
Im ready to give up,
Where is your safety now?
Because now I truly dont give a fuck...
- Immorteb
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An asshole. It's a poem about a asshole. Did I win?
Is it poo?
Nooooo but you both win a cookie amyway lol
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A poem about love?
Nope its an internal battle but its speaking to anxiety and the affects it has.
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It could also be perceived as caution.
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Beings of another kind,
We touch without touching,
I can feel you in my mind,
I notice your aura ,
Your presence is stronger than those left behind,
I yearn for your physical being,
But feed on your soul,
I know your body without seeing,
Us as one,
Keeps us from going cold,
Once inside and no where to hide,
Our bond will never grow old,
Forever some say,
But we shall exist beyond,
The universe cannot control,
Explosions as we come to a meet,
You satisfy my hunger,
Our paths finally merge and all along it was you that i seek.
- Immorteb
(I)ntertwined fingers squeezed firmly with nails digged deep,
(N)octurnal souls meeting for a session of pure bliss,
(C)hanneling the pure essence of what makes our hearts tick,
(U)ncontrollable connections brought together as one to feast,
(B)east like hunger for ones soul can not be contained,
(U)nder the cloak of night the dance commences,
(S)immering in blended essences of each other's beings as the wait begins for the next meal...
- Immorteb
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Wow... just wow... ;)
Nice Acrostic. Villanelle is my fav. style of writing, but this is good!
Thank you, much appreciated
Inside im hungry,
I lust for your presence,
When im near dont rush me,
I want to savor your essence,
Treambling all around,
I get more weak,
Mesmorized by the sounds,
Engulfed by your soul,
I cant even speak,
To feel you after i leave is my goal,
Intoxicated by your energy,
We touched with our soul,
Even after distance you will remember me,
Teeth pierced flesh,
I will remember that taste until the end of me.
- Immorteb
I never understood why they fear the dark, it is not where light ceases to exist, but where the moon goes to park, no one sees your pain, no one sees your drain, recharging as i see it, preparing you for a brand new start, as the night fades, so does your shield, so do not be afraid, for you are now healed... - immorteb
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immorteb
20:38 May 27 2018
thank you :)
RaventheRook5
00:36 May 28 2018
Luv it 50/50
immorteb
00:44 May 28 2018
thank you :)
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04:12 May 28 2018
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immorteb
04:20 May 28 2018
thank you ;)