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He Is No More

13:57 Mar 08 2009
Times Read: 673


don't laugh this is my first ever poem.



HE IS NO MORE







There he sits,

Alone and cold,

No one to turn to,

No one to help.

All he has,

Is his blade.



He takes his blade,

And puts it to his wrist,

And without any thought,

He cuts a line,

down his arm.



He sits there,

Watching it bleed.

Then he faints,

His heart stops,

He has no pulse.

there he lies

Dead,

Alone,

He is no more


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SeraphimofGrey
SeraphimofGrey
15:01 Mar 08 2009

I would never laugh. Posting poetry is posting a part of your soul for the world to see.





MorbidAngels15
MorbidAngels15
23:00 Mar 18 2009

This is really good for a first poem.... :)





aquababy62
aquababy62
02:52 May 31 2009

sweet i love i and think it's life?!





VampyreGurl22
VampyreGurl22
19:44 Aug 02 2009

That's very good for a first poem. I like it at least don't know how much my opinion counts but?





sculptarexdexfrumuse
sculptarexdexfrumuse
03:01 Aug 03 2009

Your point is logical. May I ask what was the meaning behind this?





xSweetPeax
xSweetPeax
21:55 Feb 12 2011

these thoughts are deep, wounds so fresh but so ancient.....the feeling lies dormant





BlackLullaby
BlackLullaby
12:08 May 25 2012









really nice




 

NO MORE

13:56 Mar 08 2009
Times Read: 674






NO MORE



There I sit,

And I wait,

But what for?



I stop,

I think,

And I wounder.



There is nothing,

There is no one,

For me in this life.



I get up,

I walk away,

And I leave.



I get home,

And lock myself,

In my room.



I pull out my knife,

And I think twice,

I think hard.



I made up my mind,

I put the knife,

To my heart.



I take one last look,

In to my dark room,

And I push.



I feel it pierce through,

And I scream,

My eyes water up.



I full to the ground,

I have no movement,

I am no more.

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ChaoticBeauty
ChaoticBeauty
13:07 May 05 2009

*sighs* i invite3 u to look at my profile.. i like ur style of writing..real baby, ur very raw and real which i like





aquababy62
aquababy62
02:51 May 31 2009

i felt the same and almost did the same i have a fetish with big knives.love the poem?!





 

To Death Do Us Part

13:55 Mar 08 2009
Times Read: 674


To death do us part





Here I am ,

Alone again,

No one here,

To turn to.



Im by myself,

Ive bought it,

Upon myself,

Its my entire fault.



I have lost all,

My family,

My friends,

The ones I love.



But just at that moment,

She comes out,

Of the mist,

And she holds me.



She says.

Youll never lose me,

Im here till the end,

To death do us part.



I look at her,

And I say.

Thank you,

Ill be here for you.



I lay there,

With her,

And I think,

Theres always someone.


COMMENTS

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Breetfire
Breetfire
03:37 Mar 11 2009

awww I love it you have a very deep and beautiful soul :)





snakecarmer
snakecarmer
00:24 Apr 24 2009

i like this poem even if it is your first time goodjob.





DarkFeline
DarkFeline
08:10 Jul 11 2009

They are all good, but this one's my favorite...





AngelBaby333
AngelBaby333
04:16 Jul 16 2009

Its wonderful milord *smiles softly*...





sculptarexdexfrumuse
sculptarexdexfrumuse
02:59 Aug 03 2009

Wondering piece, I can see it may relate to the love of another, the imagery is powerful and the words truly cynical.



Love...

This is what love is...and you put it into words.

It's amazingly accurate.

















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