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Absolution

08:13 Mar 19 2010
Times Read: 456


I watch the snow dance on the breeze



Around the cold and barren trees



Am I the only one who feels this empty?





I cannot wake you from your sleep



The hole that you left is so deep



I scratch the surface, underneath is nothing





Is this the way it always ends?



In pain, afraid, without your friends?



Life takes your dignity, the last betrayal





I watch the snow dance on the breeze



Around the cold and barren trees



Am I the only one who feels this empty?


COMMENTS

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BelovedxTwilight
BelovedxTwilight
15:17 Mar 19 2010

Great poem; love how it comes to circle at the end.





darkangelsblood
darkangelsblood
12:20 Apr 03 2010

powerful





Grayangel
Grayangel
04:48 May 01 2010

Good evenning to you my friend...



Your peom reminds me of some of your lyrics in some of your songs...beautiful as always.








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