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Moon the scarred beauty

15:22 Apr 13 2011
Times Read: 598


In the night sky, there stands

The moon in all its glory

The beauty of the moon

Captured the hearts of man and beast

And yet, the moon's beauty has a price

On the other side, there stands

Impact craters that the moon sustains

From eons ago when the moon was young

And now the moon has hide

It's scarred side from the eyes

Of all that inhabited the Earth

So when you look into the night sky

Remember the scarred beauty that is the moon


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NoctusAngelusProcella
NoctusAngelusProcella
18:55 Apr 15 2011

this is quite lovely. the moon is a very good motivator for wonderful poetry





 

The mother and the daughter

17:13 Apr 12 2011
Times Read: 609


When the universe has just formed

Mass bodies of rock roam through space

Some time passed and these rocks

Eventually start to collide with one another

From this process, the Earth is born

And from the remains came the Moon

The two have always been together

The mother and the daughter

And yet, sadness is in store

For the moon is starting to move

Away from Mother Earth

Weep, weep the Earth will cry

And the moon will do the same

Cruel destiny of planets and moons

To come and separate the mother and the daughter


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That which shines in the beast's eyes

17:34 Apr 11 2011
Times Read: 627


Every night, the beast will stare

At the moon that's in the air

Try and try in the hope

To grasp the moon that which shines bright

But time and time again, it will fail

For the moon is too far for the beast's claws

Sadness beyond all, the beast stares

At a lake and what should it find

But the moon that it wishes to have

Filled with joy, the beast will leap

Into the lake in its quest to have

The moon that has captured the beast's heart

But that will too end in vain

For what the beast sees is just a reflection

Of the moon that shines bright in the sky

The beast once again looks into the sky

And there it stands, the moon in its glory

The moon that shines in the beast's eyes


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poisonwhore
poisonwhore
15:03 Apr 12 2011

i like it.





NoctusAngelusProcella
NoctusAngelusProcella
15:04 Apr 12 2011

this is very well written, very good first attempt. Please don't get discouraged. it is truly good





Getsuga
Getsuga
15:07 Apr 12 2011

thank you for the kind comments. ^^








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