Over the years I've built
too many mental walls
to afraid to take a fall
not knowing what was next
only thinking my end
would be marked with an x
I'm trying to see my life
through a different point
of view
so I can start my life
clear and new
at this point I can truly say
that I like that my life
has turned out this way
my life no longer seems plain
I have everything I need
to stay internally sane
I'm grateful for everything
around me
I no longer need
my inner misery
kept inside just to make me
feel as if I was free
I can finally say that
I took two steps forward
instead of three steps back
my life's on track
and there's nowhere else
that I'd rather it be at
my friends are my family
that's the way it'll always be
I just wanted to take the time
and say thank you
for letting me be me
Thank you
COMMENTS
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DemonessAnkara
19:33 Dec 18 2009
Wow....that is very touching. That sounds like something I would write :)
vampyrebeauty
20:10 Dec 18 2009
Your a great guy Sin! Loved it :)
PneumaticEnd
22:23 Dec 18 2009
Truly amazing, lovie.. =) ♥
DarkMoonLytexX
23:55 Dec 18 2009
Excellent Poem.
FatalAttraction
00:36 Dec 19 2009
Vampiress25
04:47 Dec 19 2009
Very nice :) I'm glad that you're happy.
LunaMaxwell
08:06 Dec 20 2009
everyone's pretty much said what i'm going to say but i'll say it anyway. This is very touching, deep, and meaningful in so many ways. I feel the conection because i want to feel what you feel. Even if the opposite is reality for me right now. Again, I love it. It's beautiful, and I'm so happy for you.
Lolita
07:39 Dec 21 2009
I enjoyed this poem Murder. Its ingrained sentiment is the complete opposite to that expressed in your previous works. How I yearn to find such contentment in my life. I think this kind of happiness is what we all aspire to.
SystematicNeuralgia06
15:46 Dec 21 2009
beautiful poem
necroneko06
23:02 Dec 21 2009
wow nice... it would make an awesome song ya know... ^,..,^
DeirdreL
08:43 Dec 22 2009
love it! :)
nightlover
09:44 Dec 22 2009
that poem is well cool. it's so meaninful