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Wanted.. (12/18/09)

19:15 Dec 18 2009
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Over the years I've built

too many mental walls

to afraid to take a fall

not knowing what was next

only thinking my end

would be marked with an x

I'm trying to see my life

through a different point

of view

so I can start my life

clear and new

at this point I can truly say

that I like that my life

has turned out this way

my life no longer seems plain

I have everything I need

to stay internally sane

I'm grateful for everything

around me

I no longer need

my inner misery

kept inside just to make me

feel as if I was free

I can finally say that

I took two steps forward

instead of three steps back

my life's on track

and there's nowhere else

that I'd rather it be at

my friends are my family

that's the way it'll always be

I just wanted to take the time

and say thank you

for letting me be me

Thank you


COMMENTS

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DemonessAnkara
DemonessAnkara
19:33 Dec 18 2009

Wow....that is very touching. That sounds like something I would write :)





vampyrebeauty
vampyrebeauty
20:10 Dec 18 2009

Your a great guy Sin! Loved it :)





PneumaticEnd
PneumaticEnd
22:23 Dec 18 2009

Truly amazing, lovie.. =) ♥





DarkMoonLytexX
DarkMoonLytexX
23:55 Dec 18 2009

Excellent Poem.





FatalAttraction
FatalAttraction
00:36 Dec 19 2009

Very well written and meaningful.



Vampiress25
Vampiress25
04:47 Dec 19 2009

Very nice :) I'm glad that you're happy.





LunaMaxwell
LunaMaxwell
08:06 Dec 20 2009

everyone's pretty much said what i'm going to say but i'll say it anyway. This is very touching, deep, and meaningful in so many ways. I feel the conection because i want to feel what you feel. Even if the opposite is reality for me right now. Again, I love it. It's beautiful, and I'm so happy for you.





Lolita
Lolita
07:39 Dec 21 2009

I enjoyed this poem Murder. Its ingrained sentiment is the complete opposite to that expressed in your previous works. How I yearn to find such contentment in my life. I think this kind of happiness is what we all aspire to.





SystematicNeuralgia06
SystematicNeuralgia06
15:46 Dec 21 2009

beautiful poem





necroneko06
necroneko06
23:02 Dec 21 2009

wow nice... it would make an awesome song ya know... ^,..,^





DeirdreL
DeirdreL
08:43 Dec 22 2009

love it! :)





nightlover
nightlover
09:44 Dec 22 2009

that poem is well cool. it's so meaninful








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