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Once i had a life



now only darkness,dispair



WAIT!! I see a light.



Are you the light i see? A pheniox flame in a world of madness.



For the light i see is far away,and is going to take some time to reach .



though the distance is far the light seems to be stedy.



Is the correct path a straight one?



there seems to be a storm around us both .



Ignighting the air around us.



rippling the water and shakeing the ground on witch we stand.



The light i see brings a flutter to my heart and keeps me awake at night!



A feeling it seems i lost so long ago.



Is a step towards the light the correct one?



In the darkness that surrounds me is my first step going to send me falling away from my light?



Or will it be one step closer?



The thought of that step brings a sweat to my brow with antisipation.



My heart races with the desire to be closer.



Though the distance is far my imagineation runs wild.



And i see myself embraceing the light and being surrounded by its beauty.



But i know not to approach to quickly.



For the driveing wind that blows at my back could also extinguish the flame.



And my light would be lost forever.

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Thedarkangelivy
19:53 Jun 28 2009

Aww that is so beautiful:)

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ScarletVamp
17:06 Jun 29 2009

This one is really good...and it floods me with memories...

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Isis101
05:21 Jul 01 2009

Nice...I could visualize this.

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sculptarexdexfrumuse
05:58 Jul 01 2009

Beautiful doesn't even begin to describe this.

That is touching and powerful, and the words have such a good flow. I think the imagery goes well with it to picture it inside my mind.

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heathermarie8569
22:31 Jul 13 2009

amazingly written. very deep.

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the night grows on still i don't tire.



for days now now ive sat and conspired.



to kill the things living under my stairs.



for when i try to sleep they yank on my hair .



they torment me as i lay in bed.



squatting fat in the corner with eyes glowing red.



as the night grows on i get this feeling



that something is crawling around my ceiling



with that i leap from my bed with a bound



turn on the light but there is nothing around



i roam through my house with sword in hand



prepared to make my final stand



through the window i can see its almost dawn



and from under the stairs i hear their song



from under the stairs or from your head



are the creatchers that keep you from your bed

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Zilaheteb
14:09 Jun 26 2009

I think its wonderful, would love to read more.

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PrincesaChela
06:46 Jun 28 2009

I like it. I think you would be very sucessful writing poetry books.... If you wrote one, I'd buy it. :)

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Thedarkangelivy
07:26 Jun 28 2009

Very nice peom...can't wait to read more from you

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xPsychex
07:52 Jun 28 2009

Very nice! Would love to read more!

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Leinth
08:41 Jun 28 2009

YIKES! o.O Loved your poem...looking forward to reading more of your work.

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IcyRayne
19:49 Jun 28 2009

I just bet they would..^^^

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ScarletVamp
17:07 Jun 29 2009

You have me here by your side, Baby. I'll fight the monsters with you. I love you.

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Isis101
05:22 Jul 01 2009

Love it!

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sculptarexdexfrumuse
05:59 Jul 01 2009

It sounds to me that it is meant it to be inspirational. Suddenly goes philosophical. Ah, the human mind is an interesting thing.



The emotions you can stir up, and even create, are extremely powerful...

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morbidcuriousity
19:59 Jul 02 2009

You are very talented. I am looking forward to reading more of your work!

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heathermarie8569
22:33 Jul 13 2009

I feel like i can relate on some many levels to this poem. i'd love to hear more.

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