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My Execution

11:27 Nov 17 2010
Times Read: 634


On bended knees I'm crawling

Terrified of all our brawling

Choking now on the blood that's falling

Intent to hear the voice calling



I'm not enough to make you smile

No matter the effort nor the mile

Not good enough to make you happy

Only enough to keep you snappy



Regardless of how I try

I seem to fail to be your guy

And oh the pain it brings

As inside my soul your voice rings



I want nothing more

Then to end our stupid war

To hold you in my arms

And watch my wounds become my scars



To be enough one day

To hear you finally say

You love me no delusion

Before my execution


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DestroyingAngel
DestroyingAngel
23:34 Nov 20 2010

W O W!

This was one of your epic poems. Brilliant!





 

Forgot To Mend

06:29 Nov 10 2010
Times Read: 642


With every single good deed

My tally marks are wrong

Yet every single misadventure

Cut into me like diamond shards

Redemption seems so hard



I wouldn't piss on me to put out fire

For this demon soul will not expire

I'd sit right down and fuel the pyre

Pins and needles on my sleeve

Pinning my heart to me



I wouldn't stop myself from leaping

Across into a train

I'd watch my body reeling

As I'm splattered like the rain

Death conquring the pain



I wouldn't stitch my cuts

Razor sliding down my skin

Tears falling off my chin

Mouth twisted in a grin

For my soul inside forgot to mend

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I'll Never Stop

04:32 Nov 02 2010
Times Read: 665


I sheath my sword and grab my axe

The aftermath of battle charred me black

Yet twas not I who won the war

For battles I won were not acounted for



The victories I've held so close

Forever lost like the soldiers ghost

And while I try without rest

The best of my best fails every test



Working endlessly

My heart religiously

Can find no ground to gain

The effort seems in vain



Will I ever be enough

My pain inside me building up

And spilling from my seams

Mentally I begin to scream



I swallow all the hurt

And brushing off the dirt

I climb back to my feet

To begin it all, repeat



I'll never give in to defeat

My fight will never be complete

I'll march until I drop

For you my love, I'll never stop


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DestroyingAngel
DestroyingAngel
09:30 Nov 03 2010

You write some of most passionate poems I've ever read...





JustinDupree
JustinDupree
18:43 Nov 03 2010

Thank you. There's like 200 plus more that never reach this site. Even AP only has a few more then here.








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