I am sorry i made u cry, im sorry we cant speak of our love ,instead we live a lie, im sorry for the times of pride, when u reached out, i walked on by, ower souls danced in the love we couldnt speak,such torment ive never know to be so close to touch but chained in the fear of the game we played, eyes speaking hearts bursting from the emotion we held from each other,im sorry i made u cry.....im sorry we let our love ....die -----RIFF
GENTLY, I FEEL THE WIND DIRECT, ME PATH, NEVER SEEING , NOR HEARING, ITS VOICE, WARNING ME OF WHATS TO COME. COLDNESS SEEPS UP MY BODY, AS I LOOK DOWN AT MY FEET, THERE BEFORE ME IS MY DESTINY, OUT OF MY REACH OR MY CONTROL, NEVER STOPING TO RUSH TO MEET ME,IF I LOK OVER MY SHOULDER AT TIMES I GET A GLIMES OF IT....... ITS DEATH.... riff
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Beautiful... sweeping, final. I love it!
don't let it get you. I will be very upset. ggrrrr
wrap me in your cloak of darkness, hold me as a lost lover, whisper my name as if it a prayer , laying me ever so gentle in ower bed . to embrace one another for eternity, ur love consumes me. ---- riff
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nicely done Riff! I like this. ^_^
Very nice!
very romantic!
Beautiful!
*hugs you tight* lovely
*hugs you tight* lovely
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TruthHurts
23:54 Aug 06 2009
That's very sad but beautiful....I hope you work it out somehow. Love shouldn't be allowed to die so easily.
DarkFeline
05:50 Aug 07 2009
Keeps getting better!
xAXEWOMANx
21:40 Aug 07 2009
This is sad but i really like it
and can relate to it also
bellasiren
00:07 Nov 24 2009
sso true
bellasiren
00:07 Nov 24 2009
sso true
badwitchofthemidwest
23:46 Nov 24 2009
there is such strong ties in your writing. :) i deeply enjoy it.
Selenas
08:26 Nov 27 2009
*teary* I hope you two made up. A mans love, such as yours, shouldn't be given up at all.
fallenangel51
06:05 Jan 09 2010
That is so sad. Pretty but sad.