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Yes.
00:05 Jul 28 2011
Times Read: 602
I stand before you, naked
from the mind out.
I stand before you, open
with hands out.
"Are you?" rumbles to my ears.
"Can you?" answer all my fears.
"WILL you?" dances 'cross my tears.
"Yes."
I stand before you, naked
from the spirit out.
I stand before you, open
with hope out.
"Are you?" tumbles clumsily.
"Can you?" dances dangerously.
"WILL you?" waits patiently.
"Yes."
I stand before you, naked
from the heart out.
I stand before you, open
with choice out.
"Are you?" rumbles.
"Can you?" answers.
"WILL you?" dances with falls of
"Yes."
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It's been a long damn while since I have written in a medium other than short prose or haiku. Yeah, I still write bad poetry.
"A scintillating bowl full of yes" is what I wanted to portray, somehow. don't know that I DID.
12:28 Jul 26 2011
Times Read: 616
Night terror haiku
Screeching, skittering,
Monstrous, base and slithering,
My mind defeats me.
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COMMENTS
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Lullaby
01:31 Jul 28 2011
... ♥
I wonder who told you your writing is bad? :P
It's perfect.
Joli
04:01 Jul 28 2011
Did you? YES! Love it, heart.
:)