I had a most wonderful time singing this. The words flow from experienced hands and merely ride the tune from my throat like the wind.
Another work of masterpiece as only you can summon :)
It really does just roll of the tongue. What could be complicated you make so easy to read and love.
Some offer us an occasional stunning work. Some manage a masterpiece or two in a lifetime. Some will struggle till death and produce barely more than a recognizable effort. But you, Joli; you continue to produce one stunningly masterful piece after another. I don't believe in gods. But if I believed in a god of words, I could think of none more worthy of my praise and dedication.
Your writing stirs feelings, longings and fears, all with the same stroke of the pen.
This piece leaves me breathless... and incredibly curious as to the thoughts and feelings you put behind it...
This betrays fear, invokes fear and bleeds fear from every pore, word and image. Of course it also unashamedly exhibits the mastery of the author, their infinite imagination, intellect, pure genius (sorry, just how I see it), and leaves no hint of any under-lying self-doubt.
Beautiful, just beautiful.
very lovely , you are very talented.
This is interesting, especially other peoples perception of what you wringing about. I would of said it was about love...
I will be reading this one many more times after absorbing the few words from the native language. What is already apparent is that your mastery of words is in no way limited to your usual styles and envious ability.
Incredible, you had me from beginning to end.
"Kwaela!" ~ A Zulu greeting. (or to go upstairs, same word.) I do like this Joli.
You never cease to capture me.... amazing!
oh that is pretty.
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