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Zombenstein: Rough Draft III

17:13 May 24 2011
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The Full moon luminated the ground as it glistened in the more damp areas of the land. The heavy fog was still in full force in the lower regions. Crickets chirped off in the distance the sound of footsteps emanated from the ground. An owl could be heard louder than any other time. For the sound echoed off the fog clouds. The closer Dr. Stone got to the cemetery the spookier it seemed. Old trees with broken or missing branches outlined the boarder. 1


As David approached the gates of the cemetery the freshly buried Nazi's became more apparent. He had at least a dozen or so more corpses to pick from this was the right time, the ground lightly packed and still moist. David sat down the body bag he brought for collecting. He would have to make multiple trips if he didn't think of a way to do it in one. He had wished for an assistant one that would understand the purpose and logical reasoning that he had for creating such a thing.2


The doctor started to dig up one of the graves soon the piles of dirt filled the land next to the graves that he had picked. He scanned the bodies for any damage which was the key to the one he would pick so far none had the build he was looking for. Most riddled in holes from the battle that they had lost. He needed a bulky man one that was in top physical shape The last grave left to be dug up peared over the horizon as David looked up from the from his resent work. The name Aiden Fallon was beveled into the large stone. It also stated a bio that he led most of the Nazis as a Commandant and was shoot in the line of duty. 3


Doctor Stone dug up his grave and proceeded to open the coffin. He looked up and down the body to find where this bullet supposedly had hit him. The Man was fully dressed in his uniform and the medals had recently been shined. Stone, stripped off the clothing from the man, there wasn't really any injury to the mad that he could find. What really had happened to this man? Puzzled and perplexed until he caught glimpse of a swastika tattooed on the man's forearm.4


David tried to pick up the man and he realized carrying him anywhere would be harder than he originally thought. The Doctor took a moment to think and pounder what he could do, he ran back to his home and got a wheel barrel and took ti back to the grave. He lifted the man into the wheel barrel. Taken a break he saw heavy dark could where heading his way and would soon be there.


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Spelling and Grammar not done yet. Hence why it's a rough draft.


COMMENTS

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DestroyingAngel
DestroyingAngel
15:19 May 25 2011

Oooo...I can't wait to read what's gonna happen next. Freaking awsome!





PoetesEgalite
PoetesEgalite
09:55 Jun 06 2011

lovely..








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