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6 entries this month
 

First

03:09 Aug 24 2009
Times Read: 860


You wear hope like yesterday’s fashions

And the fads that come to pass

With the arrival of tomorrow

Fighting against your static possessions

And embellishing all these things that you call love


These misgivings you deem tragic

An affront to the person you see yourself as

In your fun-house mirror life

Straightening the jagged edges

That you’ve worked so hard to hide


Pearl white shoes don your feet

Resisting the mud slung up

By the dance of avoidance

On your imaginary yellow-brick road

Your path to the salvation of normalcy


And with the simplicity of a click of your heels

Everything will be alright again


...


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NocturnalMistress
NocturnalMistress
03:52 Aug 24 2009

this is very good.



:)





MysticalChild
MysticalChild
05:19 Aug 24 2009

awesome :D





faeriemoon
faeriemoon
05:50 Aug 24 2009

I haven't mentioned lately that I love when you write so I'm going to do so now. I love it when you write. :)





XThePerfectDrug
XThePerfectDrug
19:14 Aug 26 2009

I like the Wizard of Oz feel to it.



I wonder what it would be like to live a day in your head.







"And with the simplicity of a click of your heels

Everything will be alright again"



That line in particular left a sarcastic taste in my mouth, whether you meant it that way or not. If only it was that easy. click your heels, close your eyes, and all will be well...



but if it was that easy, life would be boring..



Im rambling. I liked your poem. its new..different than others Ive read.





 

PRIVATE ENTRY

03:08 Aug 24 2009
Times Read: 861


• • • • PRIVATE JOURNAL ENTRY • • • •


 

*ahem*

19:40 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 902


The previous entry has been brought to you by the letter "R" and the number "3".


VUUUUN letter R, ah ah ah...


TWOOO letter R, ah ah ah...


THRRRREE letter R, ah ah ah...


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NocturnalMistress
NocturnalMistress
19:46 Aug 15 2009

hahahahaha....



omg.. too funny..



Where's Big Bird? ;)





 

Re: what you need to know

05:38 Aug 14 2009
Times Read: 917


Recall

Resist

Rescind

Retake this


Refute

Respite

Restate

Reflect my light


Rested

Repose

Reclined

Retest what the world knows


Repress

Resist

Reconsider

Recognize this


Resolute

Resolve

Retain

Released, we evolve


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faeriemoon
faeriemoon
00:51 Aug 15 2009

REally like this. :p It's fun, with a message and very creative.



XThePerfectDrug
XThePerfectDrug
14:55 Aug 18 2009

Thats beautiful.



I can feel the place your head was at when you wrote this.





XThePerfectDrug
XThePerfectDrug
14:55 Aug 18 2009

Thats beautiful.



I can feel the place your head was at when you wrote this.





 

Catching the wind

18:01 Aug 13 2009
Times Read: 927


Buoying these sheets

Living on the wind

I raise my chin

And find these feats

Crisp white flowing waves

Like servants and slaves

Bowing to grant a favor

To their only enslaver

Knowing what is to come

On the wind’s next run


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ChasingTheGhost
ChasingTheGhost
19:46 Aug 15 2009

Your words never fail to catch my eye. This is fantastic!





 

The truth of it...

04:03 Aug 03 2009
Times Read: 960


Living life isn't about holding a good hand.


It is about playing a poor hand well.


-- Danish Proverb


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imagesinwords
imagesinwords
04:16 Aug 03 2009

I can dig that.





Lolita
Lolita
04:28 Aug 03 2009

I also like this... but why can't I just cheat?





CryingDutchess
CryingDutchess
16:01 Aug 10 2009

It's also about getting a glimpse at other hands, counting cards and dodging loan sharks...








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