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10! Slain, you asked for feedback on The poem Silkworms that you wrote in the 3rd grade. Yes, I read it slowly and ponder much on what it could mean.
To me it shows one who observes deeply. One who questions things. One who lets one thought flow into many.
Slain,
In the Blood,
Victorya
Ave. I enjoyed your site. I will read your poetry as soon as I have a chance. I noticed something in your first quote and am curious as to if it is a spelling error (as you mention a propensity to misspell after so long being away from school) or if you purposely did it to see if it would be caught. i.e. sole is like the bottom of your shoe and soul is that elusive entity we all supposedly possess but just as often give away ;). I have added you as a friend and rated you and if you wish, feel free to add me as well. I look forward to reading your works.
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Tika
03:27
Jun 19, 2012
10! Have a pleasant evening!
While I was here I rated & added all there was to rate & add
nips
22:16
Jul 30, 2012
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