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The looking glass~poetry by NAP

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Page last updated: Apr 18 2012
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the looking glass

breath fogs the looking glass
watching the world's teaming mass
on the outside looking in,
wanting to be part is such a sin
face pressed against broken glass,
touching reality is just out of my grasp.
kept a prisoner against my will
my only company the mirror's chill
I fight my demons that keep me here,
with loneliness and repressed tear
I so long for a valiant knight,
to win this battle that I must fight
riding up on his white steed,
to quench this overwhelming need
This looking glass that I dwell,
my fear this everlasting hell.




All pages by NoctusAngelusProcella
Page last updated: Apr 18 2012



COMMENTS

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Sulks
Sulks
14:36 Jun 25 2011

You write beautifully and I cannot imagine why you haven't been published yet. Keep believing in yourself.





B4Death
B4Death
20:35 Jun 27 2011

You write good, I had a wait for my book to be published but
it paied off when I did have it published





temporary2
temporary2
23:49 Jul 04 2011

Very pretty, dear friend.





DeathsZombie
DeathsZombie
13:39 Aug 12 2011

I really enjoyed reading,.... very beautiful poem





B4Death
B4Death
04:18 Nov 27 2011

very nice poem





MasterMel2
MasterMel2
06:13 Apr 19 2012

Very well thought out





demi
demi
23:20 Apr 19 2012

Very nice indeed.





rlugo718
rlugo718
18:23 Apr 21 2012

awesome





VanDick
VanDick
19:55 Apr 21 2012

love it






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