I like it but do you mean emotional or physical scars, sorry just trying to identify harder with the poem
I don't know but I identified so hard with that poem that I have to wear big sunglasses for a week now.
Well, I know what it meant to me, but when you read it, you bring your thoughts and experiences to it and it will hopefully talk to you in a personal way. There's no "right" way to read it :)
I really like this. I don't know why but it stirred an almost nostalgic sense in my gut mixed with a sort of sad happiness. Very nice.
well written and thought out, I liked it a lot
"Like an attic window of an era gone by,
A frame for your form to lean against
And peer through to a world we no longer dream."
Gawd, I wish I wrote that...
I go ghost hunting, or paranormal investagating as I like to label it. This Is just great!
Hmm, enchanting. I hope you know that if I ever take another lit. class I'll be looking over your poetry for my assignments instead of Frost or Dickinson like I did last time.
I like the shift in tempo. Like a drumbeat switched up from something fast to slow, the interlude I guess. Fun read Jo. Nice.
You are a very talented writer Joli .. I enjoyed that poem immensely :)
.. this is beautiful. It would work so well with the images I've recently taken. Your usage and command of language, imagination, and choices of words always blows my mind.
absolutely beautiful :)
Sentiments echoed by each of our lives...
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