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So imperfect

07:55 Sep 06 2009
Times Read: 878


Where ever so

Pulls loose flesh

This discontent

Where within is spent

On lapsing faux blanks

Licking stones

Hiding in river banks

Where laughter sings

At the destruction time brings

Fleeting moments

Over fleshy torments

And teases so cruel

Unravel the nerves once so cool

We giggle in the caves

House built by the ocean waves

Pointing and gasping

Hating this mechanical clasping

Covering our solemn souls

Coveting that which holds

Lies and truths dashed upon our rocks

With a salty foam our only stocks

Spending this energy of youth

On finding life’s only truth

Once around, is all you get

Spend your time wisely we meant

Taking your turn to hold this sand

Pouring through your imperfect hand

Slipping away with each passing day

Love and passion will be all you save

No pride, dignity or lies

Until your final breath dies


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NocturnalMistress
NocturnalMistress
12:07 Sep 06 2009

I love this.



Truly, I do.



It is beautifully written and is so good.



You truly did a great job with this.





Sinora
Sinora
19:05 Sep 06 2009

I confess to having to read it three times to 'get' it, but it was worth it.





birra
birra
23:03 Sep 06 2009

Cool... now, uh... can you explain it to me?





Morrigon
Morrigon
01:51 Sep 07 2009

I am in love with this...





Joli
Joli
03:08 Sep 13 2009

Like light on a faceted stone, there are so many shiny places here. Just wonderful.





 

Waiting for a wind

04:47 Sep 06 2009
Times Read: 889


A higher reach than mine

Keeping an eye

Trained on the sky

With an aching in my spine

Collapsing again

Broken to the ground

Set my sights up high

You can’t keep me down

I’ll rise up to kiss this wind

To propel me on my way

A kite, a wing, a push, I grin

Taking another step today

I lift my hands high in prayer

Begging these forces not to stay

To leave behind my fear

And join them as they stray

Seeking the wisdom that they find

Rolling here and there

Seeing more than can my mind

Through these closed eyes where I stare

Learning by feel, learning by scent

Crashing and tumbling bare

Hobbled legs and wings are bent

But try again I must

To catch more wind between

And ever increasing thrust

Flying with the gods unseen

Clouds, sky, stars and skin

Nary a feather clean

Before my next try will begin

Scattered I lay strewed

Collecting all my sin

Behind an eyes to the ground mood

Waiting for the wind

To come my way again


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madamefate
madamefate
05:39 Sep 06 2009

wow I liked it :)





faeriemoon
faeriemoon
07:40 Sep 06 2009

Love this, so so so love this. But, instead of waiting...go find it. *hugs*





NocturnalMistress
NocturnalMistress
12:08 Sep 06 2009

You have a way with words. Seriously. I like this one a lot as well.








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