Hey dear,
Thanks for letting me know. The content of the story was very good, and as I told him, it would not have mattered if I could have actually read it. The colors were done so that it was difficult for me to even see the contents of the page... the same is true here.
A side note you might want to remember is that anyone may get published. Most books on shelves have really chopped up and bad grammar, too, so you're not alone. But it was a good story and a cool page - don't get me wrong. And after seeing a few other pages, I realize that his color scheme actually matches for the most part, even if it's not perfect, so he does deserve an 8 in my personal rating scale. However, my rating scale is obviously different from yours, and I think that it is quite unfortunate that this had to be so incredibly dramatic. It is a lovely day outside, sunlight/moonlight can be good for you.
You were more than courteous and polite to me, and I am so greatly appreciative for that. So many people on here get miffy when something goes the way they wouldn't have it go, with all their tolerance and love. But you really were good and kind to me, and I appreciate it.
Please let him know for me that I meant no ill will, because I have a feeling no matter how many times I say it, it won't get across. I cannot give ratings out like candy. When my profile is complete, I'll point you guys in that direction and you can look at what I consider to be a 10, 9, 8, 7. His barely, barely fits into the 8 category, and I'm probably cheating to give him that to keep him quiet so he doesn't have a heart attack.
I really do wish the best for the both of you. Besides this, you seem like real decent folk.
Lamia Laminick,
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